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[fic] As the Pieces Fall Together

Title: As the Pieces Fall Together
Writer: KeigoAtobe007 (me)
Word Count: 48,000-50,000
Pairing: Yanagi/Yagyuu; Niou/Yagyuu
Rating: PG-13 (R-ish for implied adult themes in later chapters)
Warnings: Chapter 12 is more detailed than implied in the realm of adult themes, but not by an a large amount.
Summary: Yagyuu wakes up one morning feeling unwell and is unable to go to school. Niou decides to do something for him, but was not expecting to end up in a situation where he had to make a complicated decision. Platinum Pair POV.
Disclaimer: I do not own Prince of Tennis or any of the characters related to it. They all belong to Konomi Takeshi.
Author's Note: First fic I have ever finished and I wanted to share it on LJ as well. ^^

Chapter 1 - A Brilliant Plan
Chapter 2 - Suspicious Feelings
Chapter 3 - Revelation
Chapter 4 - Confrontation
Chapter 5 - Acceptance
Chapter 6 - Fire and Ice
Chapter 7 - Broken
Chapter 8 - Heavy Rain
Chapter 9 - A Dangerous Game
Chapter 10 - Letting Go
Chapter 11 - Uncertainty
Chapter 12 - True Desires

One of these days I will add the other links. For now, please read the rest on ff.net here.


( 3 Admirers — Katsu no wa Hyotei )
Apr. 10th, 2012 05:06 pm (UTC)
Hymn!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you <3

Thank you for the wonderful fic !! I stayed awake from 1:30am to 4:00am to read it XD. The character interactions and the plot development are great. I loved how you portrayed Niou's sadness, his regrets and his distress. Seriously, Yagyuu's dream really scared me >< So, thank you for giving me a great moment!
Apr. 10th, 2012 05:22 pm (UTC)
Hi faith!!!!!!!!!!! <3 Awwww thank you so much!

Is that a fast reading time or a slow reading time? I'm curious 'cause I haven't actually read it in one go. But ^______^ for you getting so hooked on it to read it!

Niou's mental thinking and inner turmoil required some work on my part. He was the character I was the least familiar with so I'm glad that it worked out!
Ahaha, the dream. It was meant to be all heart-wrenching and scary (I felt so bad for the poor boy). *hugs them both*

You're very weclome *hugs*. Thank you for your compliments!
Apr. 11th, 2012 03:28 pm (UTC)
You're welcome :D I'm happy that I decided to read it, I was afraid of the Yanagi/Yagyuu part, since I can't cope with Yagyuu or Niou being with anyone else other than their doubles partner, but I liked that part as well.

It's a slow reading time ^^ I read some parts over and over, like when Niou saw what he saw in the library and when they spent a whole day together. It was cute!
( 3 Admirers — Katsu no wa Hyotei )

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